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My mind is burning with disbelief,
my heart is aching with bitter grief,
my soul is bleeding with all my strength,
why did you have to go,
why did you have to go to this length,
my spirit is battered,
my mind is worn,
my heart is tattered,
I just cant morn,
love always eludes me,
no matter how far I reach,
love always slips from me,
like sand on an endless beach,
I have tried to be dark and cold,
but my loving heart always shines through,
I have tried to be brash and bold,
but then I met you,
now my mind is burning with disbelief,
my heart is aching with bitter grief,
my soul is bleeding with all my strength,
why did u have to go,
why did you have to go to this length
my heart is aching with bitter grief,
my soul is bleeding with all my strength,
why did you have to go,
why did you have to go to this length,
my spirit is battered,
my mind is worn,
my heart is tattered,
I just cant morn,
love always eludes me,
no matter how far I reach,
love always slips from me,
like sand on an endless beach,
I have tried to be dark and cold,
but my loving heart always shines through,
I have tried to be brash and bold,
but then I met you,
now my mind is burning with disbelief,
my heart is aching with bitter grief,
my soul is bleeding with all my strength,
why did u have to go,
why did you have to go to this length
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I had never written a song before but the other day I was feeling very down and this is what I ended up with...enjoy it if you can.
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Nice, but try to use 'I' instead of 'i' and 'you' instead of 'u'. The 'i' and 'u' and other small errors just slightly detracts from it (mainly because I focus more on spelling after I see an error) but other than that it's really quite nice.
You should write songs more often.
You should write songs more often.